rouchcut Feedback

Suggestions-
these are some comments people have made to improve our thriller we think some of these might actually be useful and we are considering using them. One group came up with the idea of using white flash's before the party scenes so people will know that they are memory's of the party the night before. another group said our music was good but to use another instrument to add effect to the scenes where shes in the woods. People also suggested that we used black background with the titles as this will make it more effective and add length to our opening sequence. One group suggested that we shortened the scenes with the feet as they are too long. We do want our shots just to be quick flash's and we think this is a good idea. One group suggested making it more obvious that the party is night so people can assume that the party is the night before.

Positive Feedback:
People did think the feet shots were a good idea and mixing the two together and going back and forward between the woods shot and the party scene. They think the beginning was good with having the girl on the floor. the Audience first thinks the girl is dead but then sees her rising and realised that she is passed out. People thought the mood was moody and we wanted this effect. People understood what the plot of the film would be just from seeing the beginning. they think the switch through out was really effective and worked well with what we were trying to do. We wanted to know if people understood what was going on and whether it made sense. We got told it did make sense and they could work it out. But as before i mentioned they thought of an improvement so they could work out it was a flashback and make it more obvious. People thought the most striking image was of the girl on the floor of the woods and her passed out.